Okay, I changed a lot based on what people said they thought would look better, and looking at better real pictures of deer (there's almost always weeds/grass in the way). Basically, longer legs, less prominent back end, more connected shoulders, and a lower elbow on the front legs.
I'm still not sure if I like this better. I liked the angles, but this is truer to reality and she's gonna do ALOT of leaping, so this might fit that action better.
Opinions?
And yes I should have real lights in there, but I'm lazy.